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Title: Constructive Criticism
Post by: Bent-Winged Angel on May 17, 2010, 05:53:10 PM
I was pondering this topic.  Is there a "best" way to ask for it?  Give it?


Title: Re: Constructive Criticism
Post by: Sockratease on May 17, 2010, 08:06:06 PM
I'd just post the image, mention what software made it, and ask.


Title: Re: Constructive Criticism
Post by: Nahee_Enterprises on May 17, 2010, 11:36:11 PM
    I was pondering this topic.  Is there a "best" way to ask for it? 

The straight forward method is the best.   Just ask for it!!     :)
But be careful for what you wish for, you may get it.    :evil1:

    Give it? 

Now giving criticism, constructive or otherwise, is a whole different matter.  Two people can say the same thing about an image, but get viewed by the "artist" as meaning two different things, all depends on whom the criticizer is.

And then there are those people that cannot stand any constructive criticism, for they will always feel it to be a personal attack against them and their creations.  (Heaven forbid somebody makes a non-constructive criticism.)

Personally, I could care less one way or the other whether comments are issued on the fractal creations I make.  I am usually just playing around, testing the limitations and abilities of a specific application.  Occasionally I render something I feel is interesting, and then I save it for displaying later on.  But most of these never see the light of day, so to speak.
 


Title: Re: Constructive Criticism
Post by: Bent-Winged Angel on May 18, 2010, 03:13:32 PM
EXCEPTS TAKEN FROM ARTICLE....
Text copyright Jim Erhardt.
All rights reserved.
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For those posting an image, it's helpful state what your intended goal or purpose was for taking the image (environmental portrait, artistic rendering of subject, documentation, etc.).  It's also helpful if you briefly describe what it is that you like and/or dislike about the image.  By providing this information up front, it gives those who are writing the critiques some indication of any specific feedback you're looking for.  In essence, writing your own "mini-critique" (just a few lines) as part of the original post gets the thread off on the right foot.

Many times, the technical quality of the images posted in galleries is so high that some feel as though they have nothing constructive to offer.  In this case, simply commenting on the aesthetic qualities and/or the image's emotional impact makes for a worthy response.

As a viewer offering your own critique, do not argue the validity of another viewer's comments (see the second paragraph under "The Poster's Responsibility" above)!  Instead, offer your own point-of-view on the issue in an objective manner.

While much has been made of the "wow" responses that offer nothing more than superlatives, there is no reason not to post such comments!  Whether it's a photographic image, a new lens or a gorgeous sunset, sometimes "wow" is all that comes to mind!  A little ego stroking is not such a bad thing either…

Learning to write an effective critique is a terrific way to learn as well.  Study those critiques that you feel are most effective, and use them as an example to follow when writing your own.  Additionally, in a community-like atmosphere such as the NPN forums, those who post critiques are more likely to receive them on their own images.

Simply studying the images on display, and reading the comments posted is an incredible learning experience in itself.  By following these simple guidelines and avoiding some of the common mistakes, image critique can be an effective learning tool for all involved.


I found this all to be very helpful.   :dink:


Title: Re: Constructive Criticism
Post by: Wel lEnTaoed on October 19, 2010, 04:20:35 PM
I believe there is a skill to both asking & recieving.  I appreciate it.  But do not think I know the right way to ask specifics.


Title: Re: Constructive Criticism
Post by: Thunderwave on October 19, 2010, 06:26:36 PM
I wonder sometimes if people have time to critique anymore.  Life moves too fast for someone to take time to carefully critique everything.  When someone does take time it's probably because the image is worth it to them to critique.  Asking for a critique is best when you feel the item is worth enough to critique.  Also having no response is a silent critique in my opinion, especially if you asked for one.  What all matters is how you honestly feel about the image yourself.  You are your worst critique.  If you just pushed a button and "wham" there's your image, then you know if it's worthy of a critique or not.


Title: Re: Constructive Criticism
Post by: Bent-Winged Angel on October 22, 2010, 03:29:32 PM
Not having the time?  Or just not caring to be helpful.  Beginners here like myself I believe appreciate "feedback"  Many times I for one do not ( for a while) even understand the feedback!  But over time sinks in.  :embarrass:  It's ashame that many newbies here seem to disappear. In terms of "worthy of posting?" I feel we get more from the "less than perfect" Otherwise your just speaking to the chior & feeding ego!


Title: Re: Constructive Criticism
Post by: The Rev on November 05, 2010, 05:25:53 AM
I have created fractal images that one person finds "just okay" and another finds "amazing".  Personally, I prefer the latter to critique my work, but when it comes down to it, beauty is in the eye of the beholder.  Some people like my work more than others.  The important thing (and I think I'm just really starting to learn this) is that the most important opinion is my own.  My judgement is just as good as anyone elses, but that's just the beginning.  The other side of it is, knowing your own opinion is the most important, to create work for yourself as the audience.  Do you REALLY like what you created?  Or are you trying to fulfill some concept of "good art" or "quality work" as if there is some objective standard more important than your own.

I think inspiration comes most easily when the artist creates for him/herself as the audience.  Let others think what they like, listen to their critiques for ideas that might not have occured to you, but don't let them make you second guess your own judgement.  No one can tell you that what YOU think is best really isn't, unless you're prepared to let them.  I think that's the real liberation that comes with being an artist.  Putting aside the pursuit of satisfaction through the approval of others, and going straight for the joy of beholding your own creations.

The Rev


Title: Re: Constructive Criticism
Post by: Thunderwave on November 05, 2010, 06:36:14 AM
I have created fractal images that one person finds "just okay" and another finds "amazing".  Personally, I prefer the latter to critique my work, but when it comes down to it, beauty is in the eye of the beholder.  Some people like my work more than others.  The important thing (and I think I'm just really starting to learn this) is that the most important opinion is my own.  My judgement is just as good as anyone elses, but that's just the beginning.  The other side of it is, knowing your own opinion is the most important, to create work for yourself as the audience.  Do you REALLY like what you created?  Or are you trying to fulfill some concept of "good art" or "quality work" as if there is some objective standard more important than your own.

I think inspiration comes most easily when the artist creates for him/herself as the audience.  Let others think what they like, listen to their critiques for ideas that might not have occured to you, but don't let them make you second guess your own judgement.  No one can tell you that what YOU think is best really isn't, unless you're prepared to let them.  I think that's the real liberation that comes with being an artist.  Putting aside the pursuit of satisfaction through the approval of others, and going straight for the joy of beholding your own creations.

The Rev

WOW! That is well said!  You truly spoke from the heart.  I felt it.
Thank you for sharing this!  It is what I always felt, but could never say so eloquently.


Title: Re: Constructive Criticism
Post by: The Rev on November 05, 2010, 02:32:20 PM
Thanks. :D

The Rev


Title: Re: Constructive Criticism
Post by: Wel lEnTaoed on November 08, 2010, 07:35:45 PM
Sometimes it's easier to criticize than be correct. :dink:


Title: Re: Constructive Criticism
Post by: Bent-Winged Angel on November 14, 2010, 03:55:17 PM
Interesting that some will critique without being asked. While at times one will ask for a critue with no response :hmh:


Title: Re: Constructive Criticism
Post by: Thunderwave on November 14, 2010, 08:42:13 PM
Lately, the critiques I am getting here are in no way valuable to my work and intentions.  In fact they are just getting misinterpreted and causing a little bit of frustration :-\.  Makes me want to post my works less and less here.  I may just post to my own site and picasa and leave it at that. 


Title: Re: Constructive Criticism
Post by: Sockratease on November 14, 2010, 09:29:54 PM
Lately, the critiques I am getting here are in no way valuable to my work and intentions.  In fact they are just getting misinterpreted and causing a little bit of frustration :-\.  Makes me want to post my works less and less here.  I may just post to my own site and picasa and leave it at that.  

That implies you have specific areas of concern about your work.

General critiques are not going to address those.  It may help to ask specific questions about specific aspects of the work.  And maybe ask in places other than the image posting areas.  If you want help, and not just critiques (which are ultimately not very useful, I agree) try asking in Help and Support. (http://www.fractalforums.com/help-and-support/)  I think you'll get better results that way.  Otherwise you'll just be asking for opinions, which vary from person to person and don't mean anything!  The only opinion of your work that matters is yours.

Requesting Generalized Critiques or asking "how do I make this better" will only get you opinions, but asking more targeted questions (like "how do I get the coloring to ..."  or "can I get rid of this ..." type stuff) will likely be more along the lines of what you seek.



Title: Re: Constructive Criticism
Post by: Thunderwave on November 14, 2010, 10:45:50 PM
Lately, the critiques I am getting here are in no way valuable to my work and intentions.  In fact they are just getting misinterpreted and causing a little bit of frustration :-\.  Makes me want to post my works less and less here.  I may just post to my own site and picasa and leave it at that.  

That implies you have specific areas of concern about your work.

General critiques are not going to address those.  It may help to ask specific questions about specific aspects of the work.  And maybe ask in places other than the image posting areas.  If you want help, and not just critiques (which are ultimately not very useful, I agree) try asking in Help and Support. (http://www.fractalforums.com/help-and-support/)  I think you'll get better results that way.  Otherwise you'll just be asking for opinions, which vary from person to person and don't mean anything!  The only opinion of your work that matters is yours.

Requesting Generalized Critiques or asking "how do I make this better" will only get you opinions, but asking more targeted questions (like "how do I get the coloring to ..."  or "can I get rid of this ..." type stuff) will likely be more along the lines of what you seek.



Thanks for the suggestions.  I like them and will do so when I want a critique.  I actually never asked for critiques.

Like Bent Winged said, I get them when I don't ask for them. I did ask twice for help on programming and you did respond to the Strange Attractor Explorer program of mine (Which is still down).  I thank you very much for that.

Most of the images I post aren't even in rate-my-fractal categories, unless it's M3D, because I know most people are over the 2D images.  This is another reason why I feel I should not bother posting them(2D images).   I just feels like things are getting personal here . . . not that it's bad to get personal.  I just feel I need to say more about the problem of responding to something without too much concern for the reader, receiver or the renderer.

I actually rarely tell someone I don't like something, but it's my personal belief that if you don't like something and you weren't asked for input then don't say anything at all.  Now if you feel you have every right to say you don't like it then at least realize that this person is human and does have feelings.  If we all should be in a feelingless world then there would be no art, music, love, or kids thus society would diminish to extinction.

If someone feels they can say whatever they want whenever they want then the receiver of such words can say whatever they want whenever they want right back at them.

All I'm asking for is a little thought before they click the send or post button.  I really reread most of my responses twice to three times before I press "post" (mainly when I have something important to say and to look at grammar and spellings [not always but I try really hard]). :dink:

I'm not picking any one out.  I just have had enough people telling me they don't like my images without any concern for how I would receive that (and again without me even asking for their input); but yes, this is the world-wide-web where anything goes, only regulated by those who feel some rules should be set in place.  I am one to speak out for such a suggestion (not rules mainly but just a little more consideration for someone's feelings) .  Whether this takes hold or not, at least someone will read this and maybe change the way they post critiques when not even asked for them.

I could go on forever about internet etiquette, but I won't because I don't feel the need right now.  Maybe later I will make a whole post on a blog somewhere....I'm sure there's enough of them out there anyways. It's just common sense.  I know, common sense is not so common....


Title: Re: Constructive Criticism
Post by: jwm-art on November 15, 2010, 03:08:20 AM
[changed my mind and deleted]


Title: Re: Constructive Criticism
Post by: Bent-Winged Angel on November 15, 2010, 02:12:46 PM
[changed my mind and deleted]
lol just to let us know!

Since this group is filled with geeks it is important to remember that Geeks often take interest in the microcosmic details of life, such as noticing that your present situation is much like one from a news article or novel. Nerds will be seemingly uninterested in the details of daily life, being more focused on the macroscopic, such as scientific possibilities and the future of humankind. Many are much less interested & or capable of handling daily social graces & being PC.
This would also apply to this thread http://www.fractalforums.com/discuss-fractal-forums/making-it-personal/


Title: Re: Constructive Criticism
Post by: Tex Arcana on January 01, 2011, 03:47:30 PM
Personally, I could care less one way or the other whether comments are issued on the fractal creations I make.  I am usually just playing around, testing the limitations and abilities of a specific application.  Occasionally I render something I feel is interesting, and then I save it for displaying later on.  But most of these never see the light of day, so to speak.
That's kind of the way I see it.  This is just an occasional hobby for me and I'm just happy if someone has taken the time to comment on my images, regardless of what they have to say.  It's better to be spoken about than not spoken about, as Oscar Wilde once said.

As a user, rather than an originator of fractal software (as well as being my own worst critic), I often see myself as being merely a Discoverer of fractal patterns.  Sometimes I feel the beauty I see in them is a personal thing; other times I think it's something that will appeal to others.  In the latter situation I find I usually have to do some "work", in order to isolate and bring out the key attraction I see in a fractal; through framing, composition, lighting, colouring, etc. - but I'm still not sure at what point it becomes "Art".

I commented in the Making It Personal thread, that I believe negative opinion can ultimately be a constructive thing; but it's important to frame it in the correct terms.  One way is to cushion it by mentioning any positives first.  Another technique can be to frame it as a question, e.g. "I wonder what would happen, if you changed the colour scheme to something a bit more neutral?"

£0.02


Title: Re: Constructive Criticism
Post by: Bent-Winged Angel on January 27, 2011, 04:10:28 PM
Framing as a question is an excellent idea!  Does not put the artist on the defensive.


Title: Re: Constructive Criticism
Post by: Erisian on February 02, 2011, 11:05:11 PM
My usual approach is to first of all say what I like about the work then say something like "That might look better if..." remembering of course that this might be simply a matter of preference.  At the end of the day, the artist is always right.  His motive is to achieve something that he is happy with, not to please other people.


Title: Re: Constructive Criticism
Post by: Tglad on February 02, 2011, 11:37:30 PM
followed by a nice word or two after the suggestion. It's called a compliment sandwich and is common if a bit manipulative:

"Your building plan is really good, I love it, such great details,
Just a minor grumble, if you could add some windows, and maybe remove the stilts...
Otherwise thanks again, really good effort"


Title: Re: Constructive Criticism
Post by: Erisian on February 02, 2011, 11:41:37 PM
I'm not sure about manipulative if your motives are to ensure the other party doesn't feel put down.  That's just respect.


Title: Re: Constructive Criticism
Post by: Tglad on February 03, 2011, 12:44:13 AM
A bit manipulative, not a lot, but a bit. Since you are basically providing the compliments in order to get them to change the feature you want.
I find it more genuine to say what you think.
Of course, if you genuinely like something then give the compliment, but just to sugar coat a criticism is a little condescending, like you think they can't handle a little negative feedback.

Compliment sandwich:
"Mandelbulb3d is really great, I love it I love it,
The only thing it needs is a little colour palette editor, then it would be perfect,
Thanks again and good job"

In this case the reviewer might indeed really like mandelbulb3d, however they are probably also using the compliments to get their request, so this one is semi-genuine.


Title: Re: Constructive Criticism
Post by: Erisian on February 03, 2011, 12:56:13 AM
HMMM Depends on your motive again.  I wasn't thinking of sugar coating the criticism, just phrasing in a way that doesn't come across as "that's wrong", but as "I think this would be better".  I was also thinking in terms of somebody's artwork for example, not trying to get something out of them.  It could be used manipulatively though, I agree.


Title: Re: Constructive Criticism
Post by: pfrancke on April 02, 2011, 05:44:48 AM
honesty